Six sentence story

Six sentence story

1. Being amazed by all the trees.
2. Surfing the waves never before.
3. Being the king of the world.
4. I hate anger management , I need help.
5. Light vs thunder through the day.
6. Struggling to find my way out.
7. Thinking of the bright colourful rainbow.
8. This looks like a magical book.
9. I stress out a lot of times.
10. Just living in a great town.

Today I have been given a picture from my teacher to write a six word sentence about it. It got pretty hard sometimes but I got through it and made my 6 word sentence .

Bonny blair

Previewing ‘Bonnie Blair’

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Instructions

1. Before reading the text, fill in the ‘I previewed’ section of the table.  
2. Use what you have previewed to complete the summary sentences below the table.  
3. After reading fill out the ‘I learned’ section of the table.

I previewed	I learned
Title: Bonnie Blair- The winter Olympian	I learnt that Bonnie Blair's family had a hard time as she was poor. She couldn’t afford some things when she was young.
Visuals:Bonnie was a great speed skater	In 2004 she was elected by the United states onto the hall of fame and ot long after that she retired.
Introductory paragraph: In the first paragraph they had talked about a mysterious lady . How she was good and a champion to her country.	In her first race she wasn’t good enough so she went back for training for 4 years then came back wanting another chance.
Key vocabulary:This talked about what it took for Bonnie's family to get her here and how hard it was to practice and practice at age 2.	Bonnie Blair was born on March 18th 1964.She was born in Cornwall, New York although she spent her childhood in Campaign , Illinois
Last paragraph: She set a new high record then retired but was still remembered as a champion to her country.	In the 1988 winter Olympics in Calgary, Alberto she won her first gold in the 500 meter race by just 0.01 seconds.

The promise: Reading vocab

The main sentences

The promise

The promise is about 5 children 2 girls and 3 boys are stuck in a underground room. They don't have much food and water so they try and save the food and not eat it all at once. The bombing is still going on so they take cover hoping they will survive.

WALT - summarize the main ideas in each paragraph.

Paragraph 1 :

Is when Asofa and his friends are worried because they do not know the time.

Paragraph 2 :

Is when they are worried that they might freeze to death.

Paragraph 3 :

There worrying to much about themselves.

Paragraph 4 :

They are thinking of a way to get out of there.

Paragraph 5 :

When Asafa's trying to make an agreement

Paragraph 6 :

There is a problem because he is trying to get them to survive but leave the cabin.

Paragraph 7 :

Their talking about going outside.

Paragraph 8 :

The place might be cracking down.

Paragraph 9 :

It being weird like there was only silence.

Paragraph 10 :

Their wanting to take the risk to survive.

Paragraph 11 :

Their worried of dying.

Paragraph 12 :

Their worried that their food might run out then

Paragraph 13 :

Their worried that they might die in there.

Paragraph 14 :

Their worried about the place their in.

I had to read a book and described the main sentence in each paragraph.

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Test result for reading

Test results

In my reading test I got a 4P . I am glad that I got a higher score than my recent that shows me that I am doing. I am learning lots in reading which is really helping me in my tests. Hopefully in my next test I will try my hardest to get a higher score.

Maths test results

Test results from maths

In e asttle I got a 4P for my maths results which is great. I am also learning new strategies and adding it to the recent tests I have had. Knowing that I am learning more has really helped me in my test because I am determined to try my best at all times.

Personification

Types of figurative language

Second-hand smoking

Second hand smoking is harmful too

O - Opinion

R - Reason

E - Example

O - Opinion

Second-Hand smoking is an ongoing problem. Many years people have lost their loved ones because of the effects of smoking  . The death of second - hand smoking is catching up to the rate of how many people that have died from smoking, this is increasing every time. That is why I am here today to tell you that second - hand smoking is harmful too.

Who in this room knows what second - hand smoking is? The meaning and the purpose ? Well second-hand smoking is like an exchange, like smoke being passed on. When the smoker exhales out smoke it is inhaled by anyone around or near them and  that is Second - hand smoking.

Being a second hand smoker, has many negative effects to your body like, Heart diseases, Lung cancer, a stroke and nasal sinus cancer. These are some of the illnesses that can affect you as a second hand smoker.

Some people say second-hand smoking is nothing compared to smoking.   What do you think?  This is not true.  Well Second hand smoking is harmful too.  Children who are second hand smokers are more at risk. Because children have smaller lungs it is too delicate to fight any diseases. When a child inhales smoke, more than 7,00 toxic chemicals are inhaled as well. This is slowly hurting them from the inside and surely they will die at a very early age.

Some time ago I found out about a 9 year old boy who has died because of second- hand smoking.It had happened because his parents kept smoking in the house. As he kept inhaling the smoke that lead him to heart disease and  ended up losing his life. The parents have stop smoking now but it is too late.  So let’s work  together to help smokers to quit smoking before innocent people will be dying from second hand smoking.

You can see from all the reasons I have shared with you today why Second - Hand smoking. I still truly believe that we need to do something because second hand smoking is a real killer now.  If we work together we can make a difference.

Thank you

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