Writing a Descriptive paragraph

Tuakana Descriptive paragraph 01/11/2017

WALT - write a descriptive paragraph of a monster

At night times all you could hear was the sound of a old smelly monster eating the flesh of human bodies and their screams. Trails of bloods would be dripping on the ground and slimy goe would be leading to a pit every time.  Usually if a meal wasn’t given to him, he would take it himself at night times. That’s when everyone locks their doors, shut their windows and make sure that everyone is inside the house before dawn. Nobody has ever seen him but there are rumors of him being grumpy, ugly and always smelt like dead rat. But if someone ever see’s him, they’d get killed to keep his secret.